Monday Morning Insperation

I was having a hard time finding an inspiration today.  Restless sleep and terrible dreams have left me in the doldrums.   Then I cam across this:  http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-leicestershire-21063882  Richard III has been found.

I wish my father were still here.  He would have relished this find as much as I.  He loved that we were related to the Plantagenets of York.

I am reminded that all things are in God's time.  I think that Richard was kept hidden till the finding of his bones was not met with more falsely deserved hate.  He will be loved and honored and burred properly.  I hope in York Minster.

God give him rest and peace.

Monday Morning Insperation

The "inspiration" for this week comes from the poem "The Sun"  by Czeslaw Milosz.  Thank you Stacy for the lending of the book so many moons ago.  My own copy has become quite dogeared.  And thank you dad for sharing this sunset with me.


The Sun

All colors come from the sun. And it does not have
Any particular color, for it contains them all.
And the whole Earth is like a poem
While the sun above represents the artist.

Whoever wants to paint the variegated world
Let him never look straight up at the sun
Or he will lose the memory of things he has seen.
Only burning tears will stay in his eyes.

Let him kneel down, lower his face to the grass,
And look at light reflected by the ground.
There he will find everything we have lost:
The stars and the roses, the dusks and the dawns.

For Remembrance.

He just makes me want to be creative and to inspire others to be the same.

Word Count

Word counts baffle me.  I know I know - book formats change, but word count is forever - until the next edition comes out.  However,  I have never found this to be a very good gauge of how much progress I've gotten accomplished.  I could write 12,000 words of drivel.  I'd much rather have one page of something worth keeping...until the rewrites.

I must admit to never being a numbers person.  Math is my nemesis.  Numbers, like another well know count, will suck the lifeblood right out of you.

When working on a project it's best to keep the numbers out of it.  A novel can be as long or as short as you want.  That's why they invented the novella and the short story.  even a dirty limerick, if well written, is better than some tomes I've read. 

Make the words count, don't count the words.

for laughs

Said What

Other words for said in alphabetic order

• Accepted, Accused, Acknowledged, Admitted, Advertised, Affirm, Agonized, Agreed, Alleged, Announced, Answered, Appealed, Apply for, Arranged, Articulated, Asked, Asserted, Asseverate, Assumed, Assured, Attract, Aver, Avow,
• Barked, Bawl, Bawled, Beamed, Beckoned, Begged, Bellowed, Beseeched, Blubbered, Blurted, Bossed, Breathed, Broadcast,
• Cajole, Called, Carped, Cautioned, Censured, Chimed in, Choked, Chortled, Chuckled, Circulate, Claim, Comforted, Conceded, Concurred, Condemned, Confer, Confessed, Confided, Confirm, Consoled, Contend, Continued, Crave, Cried out, Criticized, Croaked, Crooned, Crowed,
• Declared, Defend, Demanded, Denote, Dictated, Disclosed, Disposed, Disseminate, Distribute, Divulged, Drawled,
• Emitted, Empathized, Encourage, Encouraged, Entreated, Exact, Exclaimed, Explained, Exposed,
• Faltered, Finished, Fumed,
• Gawped, Get out, Giggled, Given, Glowered, Grieved, Grinned, Groan, Groaned, Growled, Grumbled,
• Handed on, Held, Hesitated, Hinted, Hissed, Hollered, Howled,
• Impart, Implied, Implored, Importune, Inclined, Indicate, Informed, Inquired, Insisted, Interjected, Invited,
• Jabbered, Joked, Justified,
• Keened,
• Lamented, Laughed, Leered, Lilted,
• Maintained, Make known, Make public, Marked, Mewled, Mimicked, Moaned, Mocked, Mourned, Murmured, Mused
• Necessitated, Needed, Noted,
• Observed, Offered, Ordered,
• Passed on, Pleaded, Postulated, Preached, Premised, Presented, Presupposed, Proclaimed, Prodded, Professed, Proffered, Promised, Promulgated, Proposed, Protested, Provoked, Publicized, Published, Puled, Put forth, Put out,
• Quaked, Queried, Quipped, Quivered, Quizzed,
• Raged, Ranted, Reckoned that, Rejoiced, Rejoined, Released, Remarked, Remonstrated, Repeated, Replied, Reprimanded, Requested, Required, Requisition, Retorted, Revealed, Roared,
• Said, Sang, Scoffed, Scolded, Seethed, Sent on, Settled, Shared, Shed tears, Shouted, Shrieked, Shrugged, Shuddered, Snarled, Snivelled, Sobbed, Solicited, Sought, Specified, Spluttered, Spread, Stammered, Stated, Stuttered, Stressed, Suggested, Supposed, Swore,
• Taunted, Teased, Testified, Thundered, Ticked off, Told, Told off, Tore a strip off, Touted, Transferred, Transmitted, Trembled, Trumpeted,
• Understood, Undertook, Upbraided, Uttered,
• Verified, Vociferated, Voiced, Vouched for, Vouchsafe,
• Wailed, Wanted, Warned, Weep, Went on. Wept, Wheedle, Whimpered, Whined, Whispered,
• Yawped, Yelled, Yelped,Yowled

names

This has come up a bit lately so I'll address it here.  Names.

When naming a Character the cardinal rule is: MAKE IT PRONOUNCEABLE!

Look I don't mind made up names - heck Verall. . . Eloy (Okay I've found out that 2nd one is a real name)  Anyway.  The point is that your readers need to quickly know what your main character's name is and should be able to pronounce it. 

One example comes to mind.  Lackey's Herald Mage books has a main character named Tylindal. Ta-lynn-del . . .everyone on the project from the editors to the cover artist called him Tylenol.  

Another good example of a bad choice is Hermione.  Yes, some people do know how to pronounce it, but MANY people I knew, especially kids, had no clue and made up an alternative name to designate her. 

Now the only exception to this rule is if your character will have a nick name.  In my current project one character has a purposefully long and unpronounceable name...and because of this the other main character calls him Sunny and it sticks.

Villains are a different ball of wax.  They benefit from odd names because they are, well, the bad buy.  I would say, however, that you really should make these names obvious in HOW they are pronounced.  Liereth, or Vlad, or Waldo, or Barney.  You get the idea - odd is fine, but keep it readable.

Steer clear of that little apostrophe in names.  It looks like you are trying too hard to be exotic and it just confuses readers.  That little ' is used to denote possession so it causes the reader to jar out of the flow of your story - bad, very bad!

You should also avoid names that end in s for the same reason as above.  "Chris's sword connected down on the troll's head" OR  "Carter's sword connected with the troll's head".  Here's a good example as well - Jesus's tomb...er Jesus' tome?  err umm. Enough said on that.

basic rule: if your story is about an ordinary person in an extraordinary plot - use very recognizable names.  If your story is an extraordinary person in an ordinary world, then gussy up the name, but be prepared for a nickname or shortened version.  The name is not important.  THE PLOT IS.